melody
its a cool track but like the guy before me said... needs refinement.
i can see u put alot of effort since thurs quite a wide variety of instruments and patterns and the song length is over 3 min... but the thing is when ur makin a diverse song like this it still has to flow so it feels like the same song throughout.
and unfortunately some of the combinations of patterns dont harmonize as well as they could.
next time maybe u should try coming up with a really catchy main melody and kinda just build on it.
neways keep at it. 3.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.32).
u got my support ^_^
K-Dm